A correct edit can still be the wrong edit

By Divya Jyoti Munjal

An edit can be grammatically correct and still not be the right edit for the sentence.

This may sound contradictory, particularly to someone who is beginning a career in copyediting. If a change makes a sentence grammatically correct, why would we not make it?

We need to understand that copyediting is not only about correcting language but also about retaining the author’s meaning, context, voice, and the purpose of the sentence. A technically correct change can sometimes affect one of these.

When grammar changes the meaning

Consider this sentence:

Original: The results may indicate a change in consumer behavior.

An editor changes it to:

Edited: The results indicate a change in consumer behavior.

The edited sentence is grammatically correct and slightly more direct. However, it is not a better edit.

The word may tells us that the author is presenting a possibility rather than a definite conclusion. Removing it changes the author’s claim. A small edit has created a significant difference in meaning.

In such cases, grammatical correctness is not enough. The editor needs to understand what the sentence is saying before deciding what to change.

When editing changes the author’s voice

Not every sentence needs to sound more formal or sophisticated after copyediting.

Suppose an author writes:

Original: We were surprised by what we found.

An editor may be tempted to change it to:

Edited: The findings were unexpected.

Both sentences communicate a similar idea, and both are grammatically correct. But they do not sound like the same author.

If the original sentence suits the context and the publication allows that style, what has the edit improved?

Sometimes we rewrite a sentence because our version sounds better to us. That is where the editor’s voice can quietly begin replacing the author’s.

When no edit is the better decision

Editors often see several ways in which a sentence could be rewritten. That does not mean that it should be rewritten.

Consider:

Original: The team reviewed the report and discussed the findings at the next meeting.

We could change reviewed to examined. We could replace discussed with considered. We could restructure the entire sentence.

But why?

The sentence is clear, grammatically correct, and easy to understand. Unless there is a problem with context, terminology, or house style, leaving it alone may be the better editorial decision.

This is an important shift in the way we approach copyediting: moving from finding what can be changed to identifying what needs to be changed.

The question behind every edit

Before making a change, it helps to consider not only:

Is my edit correct?

but also:

Does this sentence need my edit?

A good edit should have a reason. It may correct an error, improve clarity, resolve an inconsistency, remove ambiguity, or make the sentence easier to read. Personal preference alone is rarely a strong enough reason.

Copyediting requires us to notice what can be changed. Editorial judgment helps us decide what should be changed.

And sometimes, the better editorial decision is to leave a perfectly good sentence alone.

The difference between correcting text and making thoughtful editorial decisions is one of the ideas I explore in Building the Copy Editor’s Mindset: Theory and Rules for Early-Career Editors.

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